crit for 3D dots

To critique our 3D designs we split our groups up and traded people with the group next to us. My overall design was liked by most. A few of the descriptive words were as follows:

• Bursting
• flames
• good progression
• If you put the design on a car it wouyld go faster
• good rips
• good variation
• off the book design was good
• likes the big text

Everyone agreed that the final point in the corner is the best part of the flow of the design.

Brain expresses his excitement by declaring "yay art, yay books."

Some of the tips they gave me were that the braids were distracting, I needed to fix one of the ripped peices, the securing in my book was poor, and to cover the cardboard on the edge.